71% of you
tastes like the salt
in me too.
When I first spotted Painted Storks, they were way up in the sky, like militant inkblots on a mission. As they were descending, unstitched from the horizon, I could see their impressive down-curved beaks.
They found an open marsh below, about half a kilometer away, and noisily settled down. Their heads resembled summer peaches with scooter helmets on. I noticed just how large their wings were too. So I sauntered, whistling out of tune in excitement, towards the cackling flock. I wasn’t cautious about frightening them away because I didn’t know better. And so – away they flew.
It was about a month before I saw another Painted Stork. I did so while birding near the Pulicat lighthouse. She in close proximity to me. I was smitten by their dangling reddish-orange legs and the black-and-white streaked bands running across their breasts. They took off after a while. The rays of the sun tickled into translucence – the undersides of their wings.
Towards the end of 2013, I saw one in the clear light of day at the Sholinganallur lake. She was about 20 feet away from me. There were Asian Openbills, Glossy and Black Headed Ibises, Spot-Billed Pelicans and Red-Wattled Lapwings. But my eyes belonged to her. It felt like lust at third sight as I drooled over the colours in her plumage.
She was a painter’s dream that stopped itself, halfway through. And spilled forth its prettiest contents onto the pillow.
It took all the strength I had to remain cool and collected. I wanted to relieve myself of a prominent clothing item and cavort without grace. A mad man in the middle of an amateur Swan Lake performance.
Better sense, thankfully, prevailed. I managed to take a satisfying photograph of her without frightening the children or inviting the ire of local dogs.
(Photographs: Sholinganallur, Pulicat, Vedanthangal)
Reblogged this on Gemini's Lament and commented:
Another great poem by a great poet. 🙂
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awww shucks thanks comrade
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Thank YOU for being such a poetic bad-ass.
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Beautiful, C! =)
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thanks, D!
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Hmm, I’m starting to feel very insecure about my writing after following all these WP greats! 🙂
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Not the desired effect though. Writing is more subjective than its intent.
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Well all I know is that I like your intent even if I am subjective because at the risk of sounding dangerously self absorbed, my enjoyment is the only thing I care about when I’m reading 😀 😉
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awwww (big smile) since you said it like that
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Merci Beaucoup 🙂
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Great images again. Could you help please? The ‘Likes’ have disappeared from my blogs! Do you know how I can get them back?
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thanks, chief!
here’s what you do. Dashboard > Settings > Sharing
scroll down and enable the option that says “WordPress.com Likes are”
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sipping
elements
~
slipping
further down
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stay afloat, the end is no fun, comrade
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Wow, you’re GOOD. 🙂
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Thank you so much
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my pleasure.. keep em coming 😀
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aye aye comrade
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Picture perfect poetry.
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you’re too kind, sir!
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Fantastic poem ~ and also had to smile at your writing of your friend “immerse my head in still waters and imagine, for a few seconds, that this universe only consisted of the vast blue ocean” as I have had that sensation & thoughts many times…nothing quite like the salt of the ocean.
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Yeah sometimes these buckets just don’t cut it either, thank again!
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Beautifully salty. I just love the scruffy pelicans; they look so worn and wise, as though the maps to navigate the ocean are hidden in tiny scrolls within each hair, and the ink from a distance makes them look grey.
‘the frightening of all vertebrae’- gorgeous
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Thank you, salty sponge
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beautifully written 🙂
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India has some beautifully colored birds. Even the waders! ‘…relieve myself of a prominent clothing item’ and the thought of you gyrating missing something ahem useful about made me laugh. Christy, you have such a way with words. That last picture. Just wow. I’m guessing you were quite close and that she let you take that photo. Love at third sight for sure.
Your stories, poems, and beautiful birds that tie us back to our own humanity is rare in a blog. Thanks again for recycling.
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Thanks Shannon, you are much too kind given how beautifully you weave together your love for birds with the stories in your life ❤
Gyrating! Yes I think that’s what I was going for!
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One of my favorite birds: such long-legged beauty is undeniable.
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Certainly is, GB. The sheer long-leggedness of their souls.
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She is such a beauty !
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She certainly is! Do check out the Glossy ibis in her winter plumage, another heart-stopper.
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Will do. Have you written about the Glossy ibis ?
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Unfortunately haven’t seen enough of those beauties. Just the one time – had her standing next to an Asian Openbill. I have written about waterbirds in general though, you can read it here –
https://verseherder.wordpress.com/2015/10/14/what-would-bruce-lee-do-about-waterbirds/
Thanks for visiting again, TGB.
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Thnx 🙂
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I Just had a look at the Glossy Ibis. Good Lord ! They’re veritable works of art ! Amazingly beautiful . Thanks for nudging me in that direction 🙂
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Very nicely put! Veritable indeed. You are very welcome, my friend (smiles)
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Wow!
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Painted Storks! (smile)
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Damn, lust at third sight.
Hahaha, I do love when you use your own weird phrases!
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Giggles. Thanks ms fruit flambeau, nice to see here after a while (smiles)
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Yeah. Finals have kept me busy, haha.
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Wow! They are stunning!
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Like half-finished paintings and all the prettier for it!
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“drooled over the colours in her plumage” — this made me think you wanted her wings for yourself 🙂
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Hehe close enough I suppose. But I wouldn’t know what to do with them besides showing off the colours. Clumsy we are when driven to fly.
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